1 | This design was made using ink and a few small paper cutouts. I like the intensity and sporadic appearance of the brush marks, and how some of the tiny figures emerge from the cloud of ink. Although the current layout isn't bad, I think it could be made better if I developed this idea. I would maybe see how I could continue the design on the back.
3 | I think that in terms of composition, this is one of the strongest designs. The space is utilised well, and the cut-off images work well as they are repeated. It relates to the book's content as there is a sense of simplicity and normality from the faceless figure.
I like the way in which it is drawn, however I will continue to look at what other materials could create. In terms of development, I would like to try different printing methods and ways of making line. I will also test different colour combinations, and possibly textures.
I like the way in which it is drawn, however I will continue to look at what other materials could create. In terms of development, I would like to try different printing methods and ways of making line. I will also test different colour combinations, and possibly textures.
4 | Although this isn't a 'bad' design, it's just not as interesting as the others. I think compared to, for example, the design of the man walking away, it doesn't have a tone or a mood to it. I was thinking of using overlays or opacity to create overlapping lines, and the blank space where the title would be prevents the space from being too chaotic.
5 | Compositionally, I am pleased with this design. I think that the use of negative space makes the images present more effective. However it is rather restrained looking, with very controlled lines. During the group discussion it was mentioned that it looked 'comic booky' which I agree with, and for this brief it's not an aesthetic I want to create.
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