From just putting ideas on to paper, I did some basic mock-ups of ideas within the dimensions that were set in the brief.
Inner turmoil / resisting what you want
Set 1 | I am happy with the first two of these compositions, however I think the third is out of place. It doesn't seem to communicate the same thing, and the arrangement is a bit dull. If I was to take this lot of ideas forward I would develop their layouts further, and see how I could use materials to achieve this 'intensity' that I'm aiming for.
Body vs. Mind / Limbic system vs. Prefrontal cortex
Set 2 | Aesthetically I think this set of roughs are interesting and work together well. However, I think where they fall short is in terms of concept and idea. In order to improve this, I would think of more ways of visualising the 'mind' part, as I am content with the figurative aspects. I would also try to differentiate them a bit more to prevent them from looking too similar.
Garden of Eden / Biblical temptation
Set 3 | Out of all of the sets of roughs, I think this is the most concept-driven which helps to strengthen the idea. Although I may have to develop it when it comes to aesthetic and process, I think it has the basis to be rather effective. I just need to test out the potential of different media and consider the tone I want to convey (sinister, serious, lighthearted, simplistic..)
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