505 | Peer Crit

The crit was good because people got to see the progress of my work for this module so far. I had a few questions that needed answering and was hoping the crit would help with this.

Although the feedback was encouraging, and comments were useful, I still feel a bit stuck with the project and how to go forward with creating my 6 images.

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Notes from feedback sheet:

• Concept is interesting and important

• Funny, sweet, playful, ambitious

• The cut shapes work really well especially when worked into. Play with layers of textures on photoshop.

• Mixed media would work well - maybe cut paper and monoprint? Experiment with colours

• Love the playfulness, and how relatable the characters are to children's drawing where we all started. Maybe a small use of text could help to put it into context

• Play with textures

• "Be inquisitive" slogan is good. Could also use "take risks", "be curious", "ask questions" etc. - could have a variation of phrases to accompany the poster designs.

• Try screenprinting the finals maybe and play around with that process