Final outcomes. The first postcard is definitely my favourite, and I think if the others had maintained the same playful spirit and the funny little witch caricatures in some way they could have been as effective? Additionally, it appears to be the most considered-looking of the four. With enough elements, but spaced nicely.
Group Crit
During the crit although it was good to see the many different ways people had tackled vectors, I actually felt quite embarrassed to have my finals looked at by everyone. I did however appreciate the feedback I received.
What worked? Colour scheme, bold accent colour, mysterious tone, creepy, nice shapes
Improvements? Continue using the red accent throughout, Boy character is unclear, could have used clouds/smoke on #3
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