Postcard 3, Hill | I think this is the weakest of the four postcards. Although I think the close-up provides a bit of variaiton, it does look a little unfinished. Maybe some smoke or cloud forms could have tied this in a bit more? What also differentiates this from the others is the introduction of a figure that isn't the witches. This could potentially confused things.
Although I think the shapes are as good as they could be for the image/layout, there isn't a lot of harsh edges which also helps to make the set more consistent.
Although I think the shapes are as good as they could be for the image/layout, there isn't a lot of harsh edges which also helps to make the set more consistent.
Postcard 4, Graveyard | In contrast with #3, I think this one is maybe too busy! It's quite a vast landscape in such a narrow space, with layers of objects on top of that. I suppose it is a little confusing to look at. Maybe if there was one main object as opposed to several small pieces this would have given the postcard more focus?
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